I was wondering what should be the thesis statement of a discussion essay which doesn’t require opinion? Should it be like : in this essay both advantages and disadvantages of … Will be discussed? Or should one main advantage and disadvantage be discribed like this: for example : a public transport system has the main advantage of reducing traffic congestion in cities but it also has some disadvantages for example everyone is forced to pay for it but not everyone gets access to it.
The instructions ask you to discuss both sides and give your opinion. That means those instructions should be contained from the start to finish of your essay. You put your opinion in the introduction, body paragraph and conclusion – the same with the discussion.
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It depends on the type of essay. If it is an opinion essay, your opinion is in the introduction and throughout the entire essay. If it is an adv disadv essay, there is no opinion at all. Read through my model essays to learn more.
The problem is that you failed to post the instructions with the essay question. Did the instructions say “Discuss both sides and give your opinion.”? If those are the instructions, where is your opinion. You are asked to do two tasks – 1. discuss both sides 2. give your opinion. You introduce both in your introduction. Please read my model essay mode carefully to learn how to do this.
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Firstly, this sentence has no significance in IELTS writing task 2 ” In this essay, both sides of this debate will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.”. The examiner knows what you plan to do because IELTS gave you the instructions. Please watch my video about how to write a proper introduction for IELTS – see my writing task 2 video lessons.
Secondly, the instructions ask you to discuss and also give your opinion. Where is your opinion? It is equally important as the discussion. Please see my model discussion essay.
Thirdly, please watch my video about linking devices to start your conclusion.
All in all, you write well but your IELTS skills need work.
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In today’s world, more and more students are opting for studying in a university. The completion of university education is an important milestone for them. While many believe that the sole purpose of university education is to increase job prospects for graduates, others are of the opinion that individuals and societies benefit in broader ways from it. In this essay, both sides of this debate will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
On the one hand, most people think that studying in a university increases a student’s chances of securing better jobs. As an illustration, almost all educational institutions have placement committees that schedule campus interviews and invite the top organizations to visit their colleges and select students for job placements in their companies. Such hiring of graduates improves their future career prospects. Thus, it is understandable why this point of view has garnered support.
On the other hand, there are individuals who believe that university education has other advantages. For instance, almost all students have to live away from home, in a college hostel, to complete their course in a university. This develops independence, confidence and socialism in the students. As a result, they grow up to be more mature human beings. In addition, university programmes improves the intellect of students and countries can prosper from the contribution such graduates can make to the society. Therefore, it is clear why some people support this point of view.
The above discussion puts forth several convincing arguments for both sides of the debate. However, after analyzing these two points of view, it is unambiguous that university education is a precursor to a better job and a fulfilling career. It is therefore expected that more and more students complete university to enhance their job opportunities.
You would write “People have different opinions about what punishment children should receive for committing crimes. While some people think children should receive adult punishment, others feel it is too harsh.” My background statement introduces the topic and my thesis introduces the two sides. At no time should you turn your discussion essay into an advantage disadvantage essay. And you should never learn a formulaic sentence to memorise and write in your test.
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IELTS Writing Task 2: sample discussion essay - Simon
Hi Liz, Is it really necessary to cite your opinion on the introduction for this type of essay? From my point of view, you have to discuss two sides first before stating your opinion. Thank you Liz
No matter if you are a college or a university student, you will academic discussion essay have to self evaluation critical thinking compose a great numberHi Liz,
I would like to ask if its ok to change the order of my body paragraph if I chose to agree with the second opinion in a discussion essay?
The purpose of the academic essay is to persuade by reasoned discourse. Scholars use the essay amongst themselves to advance ideas. Its value as an instructional tool is to assist students in developing their critical thinking skills. As you recall, critical thinking is defined as: the ability toYou need to use that language in this essay because you need to show when you are giving other people’s opinions and when you are giving your own. But don’t overuse these expressions.
LizHi Liz. I have a question if you have time. In discussion essay if I do not agree with the statement how can I write it? For exampla, continuous coverage of sport discourages the young from taking part in any sport. i mean thesis and body paragraph. I wrote introduction. Please help me. I have a month left to the exam. Thank you very muchHi Liz,
I wanted your help with this. If I discuss both sides in an agree/disagree , how will i make my essay more academic and different from discuss both sides question?